by: Bradon WooldridgeOnce opon a time there was a little pig.He was cool and owesome.He went to the pond one day and he saw a bottle floating.He went back to the farm and told the other pigs.His mother looked at it and told him to find the treasure and bring it back.He went every where and he couldent find it.He saw a x.He brout it back to the farm and said i'm so lucky.They had a party.They looked in it and, there was jetpacks in it.And they flyd up in the sky.
2 comments:
Awesome story Bradon!!! I love that you used your imagination and created a story that will be fun for all you classmates to read! You are an awesome writer! I am so proud of you!!!
Love- Mrs. Pekkala
You did a good job writing your sentences. I liked the part where the pig flid in the air.
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