Wednesday, May 28, 2008

If Mice Were Hair...

By: Breanna Carroll
If mice were hair I would screma. My mom would run away. Brice is my brother. He would like it if he had mice for hair. My dad would laf. If mice were hair I wood not comm my hair. The End.


1 comment:

Jenny Pekkala said...

Breanna,
Your writing is very creative. You did a good job relating your writing to what you have read. I like the book "If" too! If mice were hair, your teacher would be bald!!!
Good Work- Mrs. Pekkala